Initial Pitch

Here I will present my initial pitch and comment on some feedback I got afterwards.

Pitch Feedback:

Most of my pitch feedback was positive. My tutors thought that my research was effective and I had some interesting ideas. I was also told that I had a good idea of what visual styles I was pitching to go for.

The constructive criticism I got from the pitch was that the initial idea I had was too adventurous and did not fit my research well enough. This was the “Drug Overdose” idea that is the first narrative idea I had thought of. My tutors told me to write a list of moral dilemmas which are more relatable to the audience. So in response to this, I reflected on my research so far and decided to make something which is less experimental, but focus on a smaller range of techniques that I can execute at a higher quality.